Plot: lived happily ever after
Settings: house and forest
Charters: mummy daddy and 2 kids Narrator:
Once upon a time out in the forest there was a house.
Child:A house won’t they live in the city?
Narrator: Um they got kicked out and had the live out in the
forest.
Child: OK chary on.
Narrator: So the four of them walked and spotted the house
out in the woods and they went and
made it their home.
Child: Wait wait didn’t you say forest why are you calling it
woods?
Narrator: Well the forest and wood mean the same thing OK!
Child: Oh.
Narrator: Um where was I … oh yeah they had to make lots of
improvements until there house
is able to hold them all.
Child: Wait wait how were they able to repair the house if they
got kicked out?
Narrator: If you will be quiet for the rest of the book I will tell
you OK.
Child: OK.
Narrator: When they got kick out some stuff of their came with
them like tools and clothes and
that is all.
Narrator: Back to where I was before I got interrupted by
someone so now they had to have
lunch because the building sure made them hungry and when
they looked in the fridge and
cupboard there was lots of food.
Child: Sorry but I have to ask why was there lots of food in the
fridge and cupboard?
Narrator: Well the first owner die before he could have the food
and no one would ever go in
that house.
Narrator: Now please be quiet and you can talk all you want at
the end of the story OK.
Child: OK.
Narrator: They ate and ate and for a long story short they
lived happily ever after in there
house and never ran out of food I mean never ran out and
\they grew older and older and they
had kids but that's another story.
Child: Where did they get the food from?
Narrator: The diary of course.
Narrator: I will tell you in a different story OK.
Child: OK.
Child: But you have to tell me OK.
Narrator: OK.
Settings: house and forest
Charters: mummy daddy and 2 kids Narrator:
Once upon a time out in the forest there was a house.
Child:A house won’t they live in the city?
Narrator: Um they got kicked out and had the live out in the
forest.
Child: OK chary on.
Narrator: So the four of them walked and spotted the house
out in the woods and they went and
made it their home.
Child: Wait wait didn’t you say forest why are you calling it
woods?
Narrator: Well the forest and wood mean the same thing OK!
Child: Oh.
Narrator: Um where was I … oh yeah they had to make lots of
improvements until there house
is able to hold them all.
Child: Wait wait how were they able to repair the house if they
got kicked out?
Narrator: If you will be quiet for the rest of the book I will tell
you OK.
Child: OK.
Narrator: When they got kick out some stuff of their came with
them like tools and clothes and
that is all.
Narrator: Back to where I was before I got interrupted by
someone so now they had to have
lunch because the building sure made them hungry and when
they looked in the fridge and
cupboard there was lots of food.
Child: Sorry but I have to ask why was there lots of food in the
fridge and cupboard?
Narrator: Well the first owner die before he could have the food
and no one would ever go in
that house.
Narrator: Now please be quiet and you can talk all you want at
the end of the story OK.
Child: OK.
Narrator: They ate and ate and for a long story short they
lived happily ever after in there
house and never ran out of food I mean never ran out and
\they grew older and older and they
had kids but that's another story.
Child: Where did they get the food from?
Narrator: The diary of course.
Narrator: I will tell you in a different story OK.
Child: OK.
Child: But you have to tell me OK.
Narrator: OK.
I enjoyed the way this was written Milani !! It was interesting to have the narrator's voice in this. My favourite part was the bit about the forest and woods meaning the same this. It made me smile. Good luck with your next post.
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